Friday, April 5, 2019

brilliant camp recount

WALT:Write an interesting recount .


I enjoyed this activity because I got to put all the photos in and make a cool slideshow.
My next step learning is to use more adjectives to make it sound more interesting

1 comment:

  1. Hello Indie Its Niah from T4

    I like how you write about camp but next time make sure that you can see you writing.But otherwise it is good.

    How was camp what was your fav bit??.

    Goodbye

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