Haiku

Here is my haiku that we had to do about winter and Olympics. 

Limerick

Instructions

In Totara 1 we had had right a set of instructions I wrote mine on how to make a caramel sundae   If you read my piece of writing then you will know how to make a caramel sundae. 

My instructions

How to make a caramel sundae with toppings

Ingredients 

-ice cream

-toppings 

-caramel sauce

-1 bowl 

-2 spoons one for your topping and one for your ice cream 

1) First you have to get 1  bowl and put it on the table  

2) Second you need to grab all your ingredients and put that on the table 

3) Then one you have done that  you grab your whatever flavour ice cream and put how much spoonfuls of ice cream you want in your bowl 

4) Then you grab your caramel sauce and put however much you want onto your ice cream

5) Then when you're finished grab your toppings and put them on your ice cream. 

6) Grab a spoon.

7) Then enjoy !

Jean Batten

In Totara 1 we had to research about Jean Batten here is my writing

 

Jean Batten died 22 November 1982, she was 73 years old when she died. She died from a dog bite, she had complication issues and passed away. Jean Batten landed in New Zealand/Auckland from Rotorua at 5.50pm on the 16th of October 1936. Jean Batten set a women's record in her solo flight from England to Australia in 14 days, 23 hours, and 25 minutes.

Report writing - Basketball

 In Totara 1 we working on writing reports. Here is my first report on basketball.

Basketball 

Basketball is a common sport there are many people that play basketball and then there are people who  make it into West Coast teams.  James Naismith was the person who created basketball he passed away on 28 November 1939. Rules about basketball, there are a few rules that you need to know if you want to play basketball like … No running while you have the ball in your hands 2 you can't touch people as they call it foul 3 only three seconds in the keyhole 

 

Around the whole world over 450 million people play basketball witch is 

More than you probably imagine. The thing that is cool about that is that i am one of those people that play and i hope people can encourage more people to play basketball. If people do encourage more people then there would be more than alot of people playing basketball. 

James Naismith was the person who created basketball and he passed away on 28 November 1939. He was 31 years old when he created basketball. The first basketball teams ever made were  Toronto Huskies and New York Knickerbockers and their games were on November 1, 1946. The first game was played in Toronto, Ontario, Canada.  

There are a few rules you need to know like you can’t stay in the key hole for more than 3 seconds or it will be the other teams ball. You can’t run while the ball is in your hands, you can only dribble and you can’t touch people well as they call it a foul if you don’t listen to these rules then you will let your team down and that wouldn’t be fair .

In conclusion you can see that there are many rules you need to follow and there are many people that play basketball. 

pick a path

this is my pick a path and i will tell you about it.
this was a really hard task to do because we had to link it
have it as good as you little hart can go and you had to have a lot of writing
my group was
Me Milan and Skylah. we only had to have three people because we have three story's to tell
so we had the hunted house the abounded hospital  and the cold graveyard . they were our story's  mine was the  abounded hospital  Skylah's was the  cold graveyard and Milan's was the hunted house.

WALT: SHOW NOT TELL

my wonderful book on West Side Surf and Street

In writing we were doing books that were on a place in Greymouth I picked West Side Surf and Street because that is the coolest shop, well that is what I think.

* The thing I enjoyed was putting pictures in and making it look cool.   

*The thing I found hard was finding the history because it is not a big place.

*   My NSL is to work harder and try not to get distracted. 

Click here to read my book!

brilliant camp recount

WALT:Write an interesting recount .


I enjoyed this activity because I got to put all the photos in and make a cool slideshow.
My next step learning is to use more adjectives to make it sound more interesting

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